Wk 20- Nathan

It was Halloween night and my friends and I were wandering through the forest. I brought my dog along with me just in case my friends wandered off but I think my dog had a premonition of what was going to happen as we sauntered through the forest. We reached an old abandoned house. Half of the house was demolished but we still decided to go inside. We crept inside but all of a sudden there was a crash coming from upstairs. The noise was so loud that we ran home.

2 thoughts on “Wk 20- Nathan”

  1. Hi Nathan.
    I loved that story. Your use of adjectives was fantastic.
    I wonder what the noise was? Maybe it was another part of the building collapsing? Or maybe it was someone pulling a prank on you?
    Well done again Nathan. Here’s the link to all of my stories. Perhaps you’d like to read one. https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/jack/
    Jack, Mrs. Boyce’s Class, Cork

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