Wk 20-Jessica

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This was great! Me on the Titanic. Even though it was third class it was still a great experience. One night as I was enjoying my dinner there was a big thump. Then suddenly there was lots of screaming! The noise was SO loud. We were all so scared.We managed to get to the top of the deck but unfortunately we didn’t get a lifeboat. We jumped into the freezing cold water. 30 minutes passed, my muscles gave up.I drew my last breath and sank to the bottom of the Atlantic Ocean cold and forgotten.

2 thoughts on “Wk 20-Jessica”

  1. Hi Jessica.
    That was an amazing story. You used the prompt superbly.
    I found that your last line was very effective. What a sad ending.
    Imagine, being cold and forgotten, at the bottom of the Atlantic Ocean.
    Well done again Jessica. Here’s the link to my story. Maybe you’d fancy reading one. https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/jack/
    Jack, Mrs. Boyce’s Class, Cork

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