Wk 13- Robyn

One day as I was sauntering home in the bitterly cold winter weather, I walked through the  forest as I usually did. I  stumbled upon a garden. This garden was no ordinary garden, it was a gardenfull of vibrant flowers and bright green trees with a crocodile statue. At first I thought I was imagining things since it was winter and everywhere else was dull and cold. As I ambled through the garden it started  , getting warmer and warmer. Then I came across a wide path that lead to a small orange cottage. I took one more step and everything around me collapsed within the space of a few seconds. I walked home and ever since that day I wondered what happened.

7 thoughts on “Wk 13- Robyn”

  1. Great story Robyn! What a coincidence because my name is Robyn too. But other than that I loved the creativity in your story!

  2. What a great story! I really liked your description throughout your story and I thought that your use of the word ‘sauntering’ was excellent.

  3. Hi Robyn,
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    It reminded me of a story I read as a child called, “The Selfish Giant” where it was Spring everywhere else but Winter in the Giant’s garden.
    That garden you described sounds like a wonderful place to be in.
    I too, wonder what happened?
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce


  4. Hi Robyn.
    I liked you story because of adjectives you added into your story.
    How did you got away from that hole?
    Why were you going through that forest?
    ~Mrs Boyces Class

  5. Hi Robyn
    That was a really great story with mystery
    I liked the way you used really good adjectives
    It reminded me of my friends story
    It got me thinking why did you go to through the forest
    Please comment back on my story
    Mrs Boyce class

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